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Lisa, You are Beautiful ,Talented and aweinspiring. The Eagle and Banner are for me, the representation of your talent and ability to do what most of us only dream of. Thank You For Being My Friend..... Mike

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mmm.. I've never tasted such lovely darkness. You are quite talented.

Hey, Lisa, read some of the excerpts from The 9th Day. Your writing is phenominal. I was floored and had to keep reading. You were right to take the idea and run with it. Great job :)!

Stefanutter (10/10/2007 8:47:58 AM
Hey ... your book sounds AWESOME.. i LOVE horror movies and books... can't wait till you're published.. please do let me know!

Dprived (10/7/2007 6:52:52 PM  thnx for the connect. writing is amazing. i collect books. i hope i can have a signed copy of yours when it does get published.

kbacklundart (9/26/2007 1:23:06 AM)
 Hey,
I finally got a chance to read through your excerpts for "The 9th Day". Wow! I love it. I am looking forward to reading your poetry also.

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Hi Lisa, hope you are having a great weekend. I just cant tell you how I am looking foward to a full release of the story. I have re-read it several times over the last few days. Maybe I can get an autographed copy and photo when it comes out? It would be awesome to have in my booth.And please, please let me know when the book is released and what I need to do about purchasing a copy and photo! What you have written would become a cult classic, hands down. I am riveted to the chair. mmmmh victems side, killers view..... You could be the next King?!Thanks, James

I am in awe, mesmerized by your writing, in love with it's power..... You have a real fan in me luv, that message reached me deeply... Thank you...

Sep 27, 2007 10:13 PM   Subject: Must Read  

Body: Goto "search" and put in The 9th day in display name. If you love horror, you will dig this! I found this author on another site and I was blown away by the bit of story she left to read. This may very well be the 1st book I have bought for myself to read in almost 4 yrs.!

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When I was first approached by Lisa, I have to admit, I was a little apprehensive. I mean, we did meet on myspace and than we got to chatting everyday and I started to really enjoy our conversations. She mentioned that she had written a book and I thought.."Wow"...that is really cool. She said that she would start posting chapters and that I could start reading the story.

Well, it didn't take me long to be hooked completely. I was blown away by the raw and horrifically graphic nature in which she wrote.

I was so totally wrapped up in the story that I would "nag" her to keep putting up more chapters. I am sure her fingers were quite sore because she was very generous in posting the new chapters quickly.

My husband and daughter thought I was crazy for sure. Whenever they would pass by my room, I was either crying or staring as if in a daze at the computer screen.

It has been a while since I have read a story that has moved me so much.

Yes, it is very violent towards a woman but it was meant to show and pretty much put you in her shoes...the victim.

Lisa accomplished that. Violence in any form is not pretty especially towards a woman. I loved "Tess's" spunk. She had a very strong spirit and that made her a hero in my eyes.

Lisa is a very gifted writer. To be able to put the reader in her "world" and make us feel like we were there experiencing all that the character experienced is truly the sign of a wonderful storyteller.

I am glad to have been a part of this and I truly wish her all the success she so rightfully deserves.

Sincerely,

Helayna Nov.7,2006

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Kathy" Nov.2, 2006"The 9th Day is a terror-filled, grab-you-by-the throat rollercoaster ride from the very first word to the very last! A heartpounding thriller, The 9th Day is an experience the reader will beg to be over, and cry when it is! You will never forget the heart wrenching agony Tess and her unborn child suffer at the hands of her ruthless kidnappers!! They are determined to punish Tess for killing one of their own, and they will do everything possible to mentally and physically destroy her in the most painful way imaginable. Fast-paced and brutally honest, The 9th Day takes the reader along for the most terrifying ordeal of Tess's young life, and leaves you breathless as she fights for her very life, and the survival of her unborn child. The 9th Day is a must-read! Just be careful when you turn out the lights tonight...very bad things are out there - in the dark!!"

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"Jody Jordan AKA. Autumn Angel" Nov 3,2006

"First and foremost, I have to say WOW! I was so enthralled with the book; I could barely stop to actually work. (I read this while I was at work!). I read the whole thing in about 3 days. I found myself barely able to let go of what was happening in the story to come back and live in my own reality. A lot of things hit home and I truly "felt" what Tessa was going thru. The writer really made me feel like I was Tessa and I was enduring all her pain. I'm not normally one for gore, but I thought this was done very tastefully and I would buy the book in a heartbeat. Not to mention, I was constantly talking about it to my friends, co-workers, my son and his friends. I would recommend this book to everyone. I think there are a lot of women out there that could relate to Tessa and I can't wait to read the second book! Thanks again Lisa for a wonderful job. Kudos to you."

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D.L. Abrams a.k.a Ladydragon ..h 2006 "This book had me at the edge of my seat begging for more, I love Tess's charector made me feel I new her, I felt all her pain, as she was brutally tortured, but she is so strong to fight til the end, felt as if I was there fighting there with her. Lisa made it all so real to me. All the charectors thier personalities as well as their appearance was brought to life to me, Lisa had me living in this book,like a movie, the imagery she had made going in my mind was so real to me, . I couldnt stop reading it I am so hooked. As I read this book I cried, laughed, was pissed off and horrified, and excited. It is passionately dark , cut to bone grusome, raw and honest, that evil is out there waiting and lurking in the shadows. Lisa you are awesome, keep it up I'm waiting for more...kudos!!!!!"

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Storm (aka) Nannette. I was caught from the first page. That is hard for me because I have read so many novels. It draws you in and doesn't let go. I was in that car with her all the way to the end of the story. I felt her laughter, pain, and rage. It was hard for me to get back to real life. It effected me so much. I would read it when I got off work. I work the third shift it made me more aware of my surroundings. It was like a drug I was hooked. Lisa has an awesome talent. It is a true gift of a good storyteller. I cann't wait for more. I really have no words to describe how it made me feel it left me speechless. So for Tessa sake I hope we get our revenge.

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LG Olson is a new and upcoming author from South Dakota. She has an amazing ability to draw the reader in and keep them begging for more. Her book, The 9TH Day is a fast paced thriller continually bashing you in the face with unrelenting powerful words, a true nightmare, bringing to life something never before seen in print or film. 

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"I've seen the darkness, I know the secrets that it hides, and I have felt the pain. I have felt my own blood puddle under me, I know the price it holds and on the 9th day I will pay that price."

The 9TH Day: Introduction

Lifeless...Broken...Hatred...Brutal...I was afraid of being part of life and even worse miss it. A marriage based on lies, I fell so hard that the blow has left me cold and broken. I hated life for what it did not give me and the man who had taken it from me. I could not be touched, was too empty to see that all I had to do was reach out; I was too scared to act on it. To broken to heal the endless wounds, find a stranger and you'll be safe, find a stranger I'll be safe. A stranger found me.

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I remember the pain, so much pain and the evil that follows torment. The fevered rush that surges through your soul and feeds the hatred it leaves inside you to rot. It keeps you locked in its brutal clutches until you find a release. My screams only made it stronger, my tears only turned it into something else.

"Swallow the pain and let it take you somewhere else."

I want to wake up, I want the light, and I want the life. It hurts so much and yet I feel so little, I feel so far away from everything I knew and loved, they all seem like a dream to me I am unable to have or hold. Surrounded by strangers yet I am so alone, I will never see my family and friends again, I know this now. It is so cold and empty here, I will never love or be loved again, and there is no pity or remorse for the pain they cause. Their eyes relentless and dark; their nails rip my flesh, blows so hard that my bones break. I think I am in hell because I cannot wake up from this, I can feel the blood run down my face, and the cries go unheard. Prayers for which even God does not hear, held in a prison of despair that they will not release me from, held in terror of the known and the unknown. Pain for which there is no release, begging for death from those with no compassion, grief or remorse. Only hatred for a life they never knew, only scorn for the soul they torment and the body they beat and torture.

'I think I'm dying'

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Stare at me and you will see yourself in my eyes, take me inside and feel the cries.

Hold me now as I bleed through, feel the pain that no one knew.

Seal it closed with a fist, treat me as if I was never to exist.

I see death grow closer with every blow, I let out a scream that lets me know, That I'm still breathing, That I'm still alive, that my heart is still beating, That I can't die.

They haunt me...They hunt me..They tell me...Take the blows...Swallow the blood...Break my bones...Take the pain...Scream for me...Love me...Beg me...Beat me...Rape me...Cut me...Bleed me...Hate me...Bury me...I'm yours.

"I'm dying."

L.G.O.

"A POEM SUBMITED BY D.L. ABRAMS"

A devoted fan of The 9TH Day.

"This Poem was inspired by a book I read that my great & talented friend Lisa Olson wrote.....The 9th Day, It was amazing and I am so proud of herIt is now going in print. I'm glad I was there to see her succeed, Lisa I love ya girl...remember when I wrote this?"

PURE EVIL

Every night he comes, watching and waiting as I sleep.

Smelling his breath on me as I start to weep.

All the painful memories, I try to erase.

Even when I close my eyes it is him I face.

I try to lock it away deep inside my vault

Trying to tell myself it isn't my fault.

He beats me down, leaves me cold and alone

Cuts into my soul and breaks my bones.

I feel I am going slowly insane

The agony I feel as my blood flows from my veins.

He cuts in deep into my flesh, he watches me bleed.

Lets me bleed out, just to feed his need.

I beg him to stop, I cant take no more.

My body is broken and my mind is sore.

The only thing that keeps me alive is my memories of yesterday

I beg and prey to GOD for this monster to go away

I'm falling apart, I am dying inside

Looking around in the shadows for a place to hide

I know he's coming back, to tear me apart

does this evil man have a heart.

I sit here motionless waiting to die,

noone here to hear my whispered cries.

Between life and death I am torn

I wish this day I was never born.

D.L Abrams