THE 9TH DAY

EXCERPT TWO

The 9th day — Mon, 12 Nov 2007 02:31:09 GMT

"I know who you are," a voice whispered into her ears.

Vale slowly opened her eyes and stared out into the darkness of her room, she swallowed hard as her ears fell upon low growls and moans rising up from all around her, she ducked and cried out as the walls burned and fell away.

Slowly she sat up as a hot wind blew against her skin. Her mouth dropped as she stared out at a sea of fire, shadows of unfathomable creatures struggling and screaming frantically trying to escape the pit they were damned to.

Vale nerviously rose to her feet and stared out as the sky burned and smoked, large winged creatures flew above creating a hot wind that burned her face. She gasped hard to breath the stagnant gas filled air around her.

The ground under her feet reeked of decay. It groaned as if alive and shook, slowly crumbling down into the burning abyss in front of her, she backed up slowly as it gave way.

"Come to me," the voice whisper behind her, her body frozen to the ground as hands slowly slid around her stomach and ran up to her breasts.

"Love me," he whispered, his hot breath in her ear, she closed her eyes and shook as his hot lips touched her neck, kissing and tasting her flesh slowly.

His hands grabbing and caressing her flesh hard, she cried out as his nails tore threw her nightgown and split it wide open, large bleeding scratches across her breasts. His body pushing so hard against her back as if trying to get inside her.

"No," she choked out as his hand slid between her legs and rubbed slowly between them, shaking her so hard between pleasure and pain she didn't know if to moan or scream.

"Stay with me," he said softly his warm breath caressing her ear. Her body trembled so hard it hurt as it got harder to resist his touch.

Her body heaved and arched against his touch, closing her eyes as it tore threw her. Feeling his body get hotter as he tightened his grip on her, his lips sucking and kissing her shoulder and neck as he pulled the nightgown down her shoulder.

She slowly opened her eyes and gazed down between her legs as a huge black snake writhed between her legs, and slowly slid up the middle of her stomach to her terrified face.

She screamed as it's tongue flicked out and touched her lips, she screamed pitifully as he held her tighter and the snake forced its head into her mouth.

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The 9th day — Sun, 11 Nov 2007 04:44:47 GMT

A feathers touch to your cheek, I know you cannot feel this.

But I am with you.

The faintest breath upon your tongue, I know you cannot taste it.

But I can taste you.

The smallest glint in your eye, I know you cannot see it.

But I see you.

The weakest whisper to your ear, I know you cannot hear it.

But I can hear you.

The sweetest scent that surrounds you, I know you cannot smell it.

But I can smell you.

The slightest beat of your heart, I know you cannot feel it.

But I can feel you.

Review

The 9th day — Sat, 10 Nov 2007 22:02:20 GMT

From LinaAngel
Theater

HOLY COW, Lisa!! You scared the hell out of me reading that stuff! Omg! Where does that come from? You must have some incredible nightmares!! And if I have nightmares tonight.....you're gonna hear back from me!! :-) Bravo...excellent! You have a gift! Good luck....I can't wait to see that your work is on the bookshelves and they are making films from it! Great work! Welcome to The DB! -Lina

From tonyb
Writing

Of Blood:
Rarely have I read a prologue and an opening chapter that succeeds in driving the story forward without slowing it with needless description. For me this story is a 'must read' and any lover of horror who does not have L G Olsen's work on their bookshelf is missing out.

OF BLOOD: PROLOGUE

The 9th day — Sat, 10 Nov 2007 13:49:04 GMT

The trees bent and swayed to the cold high winds of Devils Nest, the moon full and bright in the midnight sky, lighting up the valley that lay before it. The steep hills forming a confusing nest of cedar, cotton woods and oak. Low bushes and Locusts sharp thorns provided an cage.

A woman lay on her side, cradling herself in an endless chill of the night amongst tall fading grasses and dying leaves with a small creek trickling beside her. Her bloody hands tightly grasping her arms trying to stop the chill of the night as a low lying mist settled into the valley floor.

Dark figures stood motionless watching over her, cold black eyes piercing the darkness as if waiting for a sign to begin. She whimpered softly, almost too soft for the human ear, but to them they were ear-piercing screams in the night, arousing them and feeding unknown desires. The smell of her warm blood carried on the winds, danced around them, only to excite them more.

For years they had waited, for centuries they had hunted, and now the hunt ended here and now, somewhere out there awaited the one that would free them from the darkness, and bring an true nightmare to light.

She slowly pushed up to her knees and gazed nervously around herself, her heart racing against her chest and pounding blood threw her ears. Not knowing how she had got here, or why she was here. However, the eyes that watched and taunted her from the shadows, with hisses and moans. Whispering her name, calling to her, tormenting her.

Her beautiful face trembled as she searched the shadows of the tree line with tear-filled eyes for a glimpse of her captures.
Twigs would snap and leaves would rustled around her as the hunters slowly circled her, rabid and hungry for that one taste of life they could never hold but they could devour and destroy.

"Come to me," one hissed from the dark.

She sharply turned her head as deep laughter echoed from the trees. Crouching down in the shadows they watched her unblinking. One leaped from nowhere and landed on his feet a few feet from her, and crouched down. Cocking his head to the side he grinned slyly and his eyes glinted.

She trembled as he watched her as if entertained by her fear. Her head jerked around following the noises around her. She took an shuddering breath and slowly gazed around herself when she was brutally slammed face down to the ground and left lying shaking from the pain. Long scratches ripped threw her back as her nightgown began to turn it red.

She cried out pitifully as blood ran down from her blonde hair to her pale cheek and dripped to the ground. Her hands shook as she tried to get up, only to have her hair grabbed violently and head pulled back.

Fingernails pierced and tore the tender flesh of her breasts as he pulled to her knees; her body awkwardly being bent backwards against him. A deep chuckle as his arm tightened under her ribs. Her head rolled back against him and gasped as she struggled with his grip under her ribs; his nails piercing her side.

From the dark another slowly approached her. He smiled warmly as he gazed down at her. She trembled as she gazed up to him with tear filled eyes.

"Please," she whimpered to him as he reached up and ran a fingertip down her pale cheek.

He glanced up to the one behind her and nodded. He released her.

"Is that better?" he whispered to the terrified girl as his hand gently ran down the side of her quivering face.
She calmed and closer her eyes as he pulled her close and held her. Her cheek resting against his shoulder as held her tightly.

"Are you ready for me, Angel," he asked as she trembled in his hands.

He slowly bent down and moved her hair aside, his lips slid down her neck and kissed it softly. Taking her face gentally in his hand, he smiled warmly into her terrified eyes and then softly kissed her lips. He paused a moment then kissed her again, slowly and deeply. She gasped hard and shuddered as his lips moved down to her shoulder and his grasped her wantonly.

Suddenly biting viciously into her shoulder. Her body arched back and tensed as sharp teeth punctured tender flesh. Unable to cry out or even scream as he Fed on the pleasure of her pain and the blood that ran.

Her eyes glazed and her head slowly fell back as his lips moved slowly up to her neck; leaving a bloody trail. He clamped down on the side of her throat and severed the juggler, her entire body trembled violently as he feed.
He pulled back as she hung limply from his arms and smiled down at her as he carefully pulled her up.

She whimpered softly as he turned her body and pulled her back to his chest. His hands ran around her body and grasped her breasts tightly. He slowly pulled her head up, his body rubbing against her as he whispered in her ear.

"Tonight I have loved you, like no other will ever love you. I have entered your body as I will enter it from this night on," He whispered softly as he grasped her breasts and massaged them, blood running between his fingers.

The two others were moving in the shadows with howls and laugher awaiting their time to feed. Her eyes glazed over and staring emptily to the sky and her breathing shallow as she hung limp from his arms.
"And when I call to you, you will come to me." He grabbed and turned her cheek softly and kissed her lips deeper and deeper, her blood slowly rolling down their chins.

He gazed up and smiled as the other two approached her with lit eyes. His hand wrapped around her throat and held her as the one in front of her ripped the bodice down and exposed her breasts. He handed her over to him and stepped away.
He wrapped his arms around her and kissed her bloody lips as the other came up from behind and wrapped his arms around her waist. His lips moving slowly over shoulder as she moaned under the others kiss. His mouth running down her chin and neck to the fine pale flesh of her breast.

She groaned as his lips took her nipple carefully and his hands prodded her breasts. Their excitement growing hotter as she reacted with pleasure. She gasped deeply and held her breath as he bit into her breast, prodding at her like a newborn as he feed.